Post by {*Picabo*} on Oct 16, 2007 4:36:34 GMT 8
This is a story based on the warrior series. I so far have written 4 chapters of the first book and the prolouge. Below is a part of the 1st chapter.
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Waterpaw looked around at all the cats in camp. Lightningstar was lying down on the cliff he gave speeches from Rabbitfur was in her den, sorting through the herbs. Waterpaw sat down and wrapped her tail around her paws. Waterpaw was soon knocked down to the ground. After slowly raising herself up, she realized it was none other than her brother Wolfpaw.
“Hey!” she meowed. “I wasn’t paying attention! That wasn’t fair!” Waterpaw looked over to see her brother giggling at her fall.
“Yeah, but will Shadowclan wait for you to pay attention?” Wolfpaw pointed out to his sister.
Waterpaw glared at Wolfpaw. Then, when he wasn’t paying attention, she lounged at him. Waterpaw easily pinned Wolfpaw down. “Haha! Who wasn’t paying attention now?” she asked triumphantly.
Waterpaw then noticed Lightningstar was glaring at her and Wolfpaw. He gave them a look that said, ‘You two are apprentices now, can’t you act it?’. Waterpaw got the message and got off of Wolfpaw.
Wolfpaw didn’t get the messaged though. As soon as his sister got off, he jumped on her. Waterpaw gave Wolfpaw a look that said Lightningstar was watching. “Oh,” he meowed, realizing his mistake. Then, Wolfpaw got off of his sister. He sat down next to her and wrapped his tail around his paws, acting like nothing had happened.
Waterpaw got up and sat down. She too wrapped her tail around her paws. “So, how is Runningshadow teaching you?” she asked her brother. Runningshadow scared her, but he might be a good mentor for her pesky brother.
“Eh, he is… well…. Well, his intentions are good,” Wolfpaw mumbled. Then he meowed too loudly, “Awww, who am I kidding? He is a horrible mentor. One moon, and all I have done is crouching techniques and stupid stuff like that. I wanna learn how to fight! I wanna actually hunt, instead of just practicing the techniques!”
Little did Wolfpaw and Waterpaw know, that Runningshadow was right behind them and was hearing everything. Runningshadow was hurt, but he was strong and didn’t let anyone see him sad or emotionally hurt. Runningshadow walked up to the two apprentices and meowed, “Do you want me to take you two battle training?”
The apprentices wondered if Runningshadow heard their conversation. They hoped he didn’t- he would have been devastated. Wolfpaw then spoke up after a minute of silence and meowed, “Yeah.”
Waterpaw looked at Runningshadow with confusion. “What about my mentor?” she asked, wondering if Firestripe was coming with them. “Isn’t she with Rabbitfur because she has whitecough?” Runningshadow pointed out. “Come on, let’s go!” Runningshadow then ran out of camp before the apprentices could say anything else.
The two apprentices shrugged and ran after Runningshadow out of the camp.
“Hey!” she meowed. “I wasn’t paying attention! That wasn’t fair!” Waterpaw looked over to see her brother giggling at her fall.
“Yeah, but will Shadowclan wait for you to pay attention?” Wolfpaw pointed out to his sister.
Waterpaw glared at Wolfpaw. Then, when he wasn’t paying attention, she lounged at him. Waterpaw easily pinned Wolfpaw down. “Haha! Who wasn’t paying attention now?” she asked triumphantly.
Waterpaw then noticed Lightningstar was glaring at her and Wolfpaw. He gave them a look that said, ‘You two are apprentices now, can’t you act it?’. Waterpaw got the message and got off of Wolfpaw.
Wolfpaw didn’t get the messaged though. As soon as his sister got off, he jumped on her. Waterpaw gave Wolfpaw a look that said Lightningstar was watching. “Oh,” he meowed, realizing his mistake. Then, Wolfpaw got off of his sister. He sat down next to her and wrapped his tail around his paws, acting like nothing had happened.
Waterpaw got up and sat down. She too wrapped her tail around her paws. “So, how is Runningshadow teaching you?” she asked her brother. Runningshadow scared her, but he might be a good mentor for her pesky brother.
“Eh, he is… well…. Well, his intentions are good,” Wolfpaw mumbled. Then he meowed too loudly, “Awww, who am I kidding? He is a horrible mentor. One moon, and all I have done is crouching techniques and stupid stuff like that. I wanna learn how to fight! I wanna actually hunt, instead of just practicing the techniques!”
Little did Wolfpaw and Waterpaw know, that Runningshadow was right behind them and was hearing everything. Runningshadow was hurt, but he was strong and didn’t let anyone see him sad or emotionally hurt. Runningshadow walked up to the two apprentices and meowed, “Do you want me to take you two battle training?”
The apprentices wondered if Runningshadow heard their conversation. They hoped he didn’t- he would have been devastated. Wolfpaw then spoke up after a minute of silence and meowed, “Yeah.”
Waterpaw looked at Runningshadow with confusion. “What about my mentor?” she asked, wondering if Firestripe was coming with them. “Isn’t she with Rabbitfur because she has whitecough?” Runningshadow pointed out. “Come on, let’s go!” Runningshadow then ran out of camp before the apprentices could say anything else.
The two apprentices shrugged and ran after Runningshadow out of the camp.
If you would like to read the rest, go to:
www.freewebs.com/thefiveplauges/index.htm