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Dec 13, 2007 22:57:43 GMT 8
Post by Dragonstar on Dec 13, 2007 22:57:43 GMT 8
Please give suggestions on how the plot should be. This site's kinda dying down. Thanks! ;D
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Dec 13, 2007 23:05:08 GMT 8
Post by Crystalpelt on Dec 13, 2007 23:05:08 GMT 8
My suggestion:
Two different and bad Clans come to stay in forest.
One is ___Clan (haven't decided the name yet...) fierce and powerful. That Clan love to attack other Clans because they have many strong cats.
On the other hand, ___Clan (a Clan on its own and no allies with the previous Clan) is mysterious and plenty of tactics. The cats there plan their evil striking plans secretly and attack, causing misunderstandings and quarrels.
How about that? ;D Like it?
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Dec 14, 2007 5:24:26 GMT 8
Post by Thrushwing on Dec 14, 2007 5:24:26 GMT 8
Journey to the vastness, young ‘uns Farther than StarClan knows, And half a fox length more, at that, Where the Balfour River flows.
Listen to the Old Ones, Their wisdom is unmatched Listen to their stories, Where a secret is stashed.
Brave the terror, and the joy, The sun, rain, and snow Face the darkest secret And then may StarClan know.
Okay, here's my master plan... The Clans are at a troubled time, filled with war and betrayal. As trust and hope rise and fall like waves, the Clans withdraw into their own lives.
But who says that that will create peace?
Four cats, one from each mortal Clan, decide to meet every moon, creating their own Gathering. StarClan sees this, and blesses each cat with an amazing ability: To travel in StarClan's lands and beyond. Soon, these cats are discovered, and, not banned, but taken away from each other and the Clans to live in their own trees and dens.
But friendship and love are a powerful thing.
These cats travel far to find each other, and then take a remarkable journey to the Old Ones, a group of dead cats who are extremely wise. These cats live at the Balfour River, also known as the River of Peace. After listening to the Old One's many tales, they discover a dark secret about StarClan, and their own home...
May peace light the forest... You likey? I can PM the secrets to a staff member, don't want to ruin the plot!
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Dec 14, 2007 13:47:56 GMT 8
Post by Crystalpelt on Dec 14, 2007 13:47:56 GMT 8
O.O Wow! Great plot! I'll never be able to be so creative. -Shakes hand- I like the plot. How about Dragonstar? ;D
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Dec 14, 2007 18:04:04 GMT 8
Post by Dragonstar on Dec 14, 2007 18:04:04 GMT 8
Great plot Raineh!!!! ;D By the way, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Dec 14, 2007 23:22:46 GMT 8
Post by Crystalpelt on Dec 14, 2007 23:22:46 GMT 8
That's Thrushwing, missie. I just yelled a Happy Birthday to Raineh but I don't know whether she heard it... ;D
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Dec 15, 2007 7:56:12 GMT 8
Post by Thrushwing on Dec 15, 2007 7:56:12 GMT 8
Glad you all like it!
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