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Post by Raineh on Oct 20, 2007 22:26:54 GMT 8
Queen’s name: Rainfall Kits’ names: Shiningkit- Black she-cat with green eyes (taken) Silverkit- Pale silvery-grey she-cat with black specks and blue eyes (taken) Nightkit- Black tom with brown eyes(taken) Stripedkit(dies)- Silvery-grey tom with dark stripes, almost black. He is very sickly and has green eyes. (taken) Reason: I'm keeping Angelkit, but the others are too much for me to handle. Rules: Please write a good, six-line roleplay example. Then you must make a bio for the kit. Others: The kits will be born when they are all adopted.
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Post by Crystalpelt on Oct 21, 2007 12:48:01 GMT 8
Oh, please Raineh! Let me have Silverkit! I'll make a role-play post later! ;D Thanks! EDIT: (Okay, here goes nothing!) It was a bright morning and the sun was shining brightly in the sky. Silverkit was still cuddled up with her siblings, sleeping so soundly next to their mother, Rainfall. Then, the pale silver kit woke up reluctantly and let out a huge yawn. It's so good to be in the nursery, the little kit whispered, loud enough for herself to hear. An idea struck Silverkit right in her head - she would go around the RiverClan camp to explore the places, especially the apprentices' and warriors' den. Without thinking twice, Silverkit darted out of the nursery and skidded to a halt when she realized that she almost knocked into the RiverClan leader, Ebonystar. "I am so, so sorry, Ebonystar," Silverkit exclaimed, recovering from her shock. She really didn't mean to offend the leader. The silver kitten looked at the black leader with big blue eyes. (Is the role-play post okay? I'll make the bio after my exams, I promise!
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Post by Raineh on Oct 21, 2007 19:50:09 GMT 8
It is excellent
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Post by Crystalpelt on Oct 21, 2007 21:32:33 GMT 8
Thank you so so so much, Raineh! ;D
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Post by Opalsong on Oct 22, 2007 4:42:30 GMT 8
bio for Stripedkit:
A silvery-gray kit walked out of the nursery into the coldness of the morning. Stripedkit hated being cooped up in the nursery. His black-striped pelt glistened in the sunrise as he sat down in the middle of the camp. Wow.... The sunrise is so beautiful this morning. It is as if I could live on forever... An earsplitting screech filled the camp as Rainfall, Stripedkit's mother, ran out into the clearing of the camp. She looked worried. "Where is Stripedkit! I can't find him anywhere!" Rainfall yowled as she searched frantically. Then she spotted Stripedkit sitting in the middle of the clearing, looking up at the sunrise, "There you are! I thought a fox got you!" Rainfall snapped at Stripedkit, who was hanging his head. "I am sorry..." Stripedkit mewed as he walked back off toward the nursery with Rainfall behind him.
Good?
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Post by Raineh on Oct 22, 2007 6:40:27 GMT 8
You have to rewrite it. Rainfall wouldn't act that way, and ou aren't supposed to control other people's characters.
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Post by Opalsong on Oct 22, 2007 11:20:11 GMT 8
(ok... sorry...) Bio for Stripedkit: Stripedkit ran out of the nursery happily. He loved the morning. The sunrise made him feel like a newly appointed warrior. He ran around the camp swiftly, letting all his energy flow through his body. The sun was just coming up, and a dawn patrol was going out. A bird twittered frantically overhead. What is wrong with that hawk? Stripedkit asked himself. He walked over to the edge of the camp. He could sense that something was wrong. His whole pelt was tingling. He knew that there was something wrong out in the forest. What is wrong? Something is different. Very different. Stripedkit thought frantically.
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Post by <---Arrow---- on Oct 24, 2007 3:51:45 GMT 8
Reserve Shiningkit for me, sis!
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Post by [[ E.bon.Y ]] on Oct 25, 2007 1:12:09 GMT 8
SHINIGKIT:
Name- Shininkit Rank- Kit Gender- She-cat Description- Shiningkit is a beautiful, jet black kit. She has neon-green eyes, always gleaming with happiness. Her paws have a few grey speckles, almost unnoticeable against the deep ebony. Her muzzle is milky white. She has a very long tale, like a leopard. Her ears are of the deepest black, with snow white speckles. Personality- Shiningkit is has a great personality. She can befriend anyone. She's always passionate towards others. She refuses to have bad feelings towards anyone for more than a few days. She has no temper, and has a guilty conscious [spelling?]. History- She was born into Riverclan, and her mother was Rainfall. [Not a long history xD] RP- I've done this so much [almost 6 months] I don't need one do I? |D
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Post by Raineh on Oct 25, 2007 5:19:14 GMT 8
Shiningkit has been reserved. And you would have had to do a roleplay example. And you need to spell the kit's name right.
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Post by [[ E.bon.Y ]] on Oct 25, 2007 22:04:33 GMT 8
Shiningkit has been reserved. And you would have had to do a roleplay example. And you need to spell the kit's name right. 1. Okay, didn't see that. 2. Okay. 3. I type real fast, and I'm horrible at it. .__.
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Post by <---Arrow---- on Oct 28, 2007 9:39:21 GMT 8
I'm gonna do a really bad example right now so that she doesn't die.(Which I am not happy about at all because I have limited computer time and need to split it between many sites and I like to make my bios long and detailed) It was a clear, crisp leaf-fall day. The sun was shining, the wind just barely blew, and the camp was stirring with excitement. Shiningkit merely added to it. The little she-kit darted around, under the legs and tails of warriors, over stones and lumps of dirt on the ground. She suddenly noticed the twitch of a pale silvery-colored tail. Smiling, the she-kit pounced on the tail, and rolled over to see her sister Angelkit. 'Whuzzup Angelkit? wanna go have funn??" she asked her sister, rather hyperactivly. *kills post*
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Post by Crystalpelt on Oct 28, 2007 14:49:57 GMT 8
So so so sorry, Arrow, I didn't mean to threaten anybody... It's just that many members do not make their posts for their adopted kittens, including me and I had to think of a way to persuade them. I have to finish Cookiekit's role-playing post too... *sobs*
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Post by Emberfur on Oct 29, 2007 8:17:17 GMT 8
Oh please let me have NightKit! Role play: It was a dark, stormy winter night when Nightkit emerged from the darkness of the den, just minutes after being born. His eyes the color of a pool of chocolate and his expression showed his curiosity for the world. You could easily tell he was curious about the world that lay in front of him and about his life and what was to come. He began to walk around, wondering the land and exploring the territory of in which he was born. As the clouds began to part and the sun slowly began to rise above the horizon, Nightkit returned to the den to get some sleep. I can't wait for to see what is to come in my life, he thought as the black tom drifted off to sleep. (Would you like me to write the bio)
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Post by Raineh on Nov 2, 2007 8:51:21 GMT 8
You may have Nightkit Emberfur.
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Post by Emberfur on Nov 5, 2007 6:40:21 GMT 8
thank you! I talked to Crystalpelt I will not be able to write a bio for a while I am really sick she says she will not let him die for a month! Thank you for your understanding!
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