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Dusk::ThunderClan Deputy::Tom « Thread Started on Oct 7, 2007, 7:30am »
Name: Dusk
Gender: Tom
Age: 24 moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Deputy
Mate: Nope
Kits: Nah
Appearance: Dusk is a very light brown tom, dappled with orange and black, with a white underbelly, giving the impression that he glows when seen in the right light. He is a muscular cat, very sturdy and heavy, and he uses his weight to his advantage in battle. His eyes are a blazing amber color and are surprisingly deep and wise although he doesn't act like it. He has long claws and teeth both with razor sharp edges. His underbelly is a slightly lighter brown, almost orange and black spots dappled along stomach. His tail is longer than the average tom and it gives him great balance and agility, of which you wouldn't expect of such a large cat. He has a large scar along his left shoulder. When his coat is seen in the right light, it gives the impression that he is glowing. One can tell when Dusk is planning something mischievous, as his amber eyes glow like embers. When he is angry, his eyes flash with the light of a fire.
Personality: Dusk has a strong, silent mannerism about himself, yet he is a kind cat at heart, although he finds it hard to become close to other cats, which is partly due to his tough upbringing. He often puts his own life at stake for the sheer fun of it, part of which resulted in his scarred shoulder. Too cats that don't know him, which is almost all cats, he seems like a cat who doesn't talk and puts true meaning to the saying actions mew louder than words. But if a cat got to know him they would find he is quite a talkative cat just not as loud as some others. He is often shy when he meets new cats, but when his trust is earned, the cat can rest assured that he has made a good friend in Dusk. He can be snappy and mean sometimes, but usually only if you wake him up. He loves to sleep. When he was a warrior, his sharp mind and even sharper tongue would often get him into trouble.
History: Dusk's father was a loyal WindClan cat, Badgerclaw, who fell in love with a ThunderClan she-cat, Foxpelt. Their forbidden love continued through many moons until Foxpelt kitted mid-newleaf. Only one survived and that was Dusk, then Duskkit. Foxpelt and Badgerclaw felt it would be best if he went to WindClan although many moons of continuous criticism and unfair judgment, combined with the recent death of his friend and mentor, Sootface caused Duskpaw to run away. Less than a moon after he ran away from the Clans a viscous dog attack drove him into ThunderClan territory, where he his for many moons, until his WindClan scent was completely gone. When he felt confident enough, Dusk entered the ThunderClan camp, and asked to be a ThunderClan warrior. The kind leader of that time agreed, seeing the skills that Dusk possessed. Even as he rose through the ThunderClan ranks, he never told anyone of his past, and decided to keep his name as Dusk, to Honor his moons as a loner.
Role-play Example: Dusk stretched luxuriously, parted his jaws in a massive yawn, and padded out of his den. As he headed for the exit, he grinned as he saw a few kits play-fighting near the nursery, their mothers watching anxiously, picking them up whenever one fell. Dusk loved greenleaf. It was a time when the forest was beautiful, the Clan was blooming, and everyone was happy. Bu best of all, he could sleep in. Smiling to himself, he walked out of the camp, and headed for a nearby tree. He was planning to take quick nap, patrol the borders, grab some fresh-kill, and be back before anyone even notices he was gone. As he approached the tree of his choice, he realized it was the very same tree that he had spent his first night away from WindClan in. He sighed, remembering the endless nights, and the mornings spent avoiding patrols, instead of sleeping. Still that was moons ago, and now he was deputy of a Clan, so he had responsibilities.
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Re: Dusk::ThunderClan Deputy::Tom « Reply #1 on Oct 7, 2007, 8:39am »
This bio is from Drowning In Dreams, yay! And, please put a picture (at least one picture), thank you. I will help you to find a picture like Dusk, ok?
(That's all I can find, now it's all up to you! Put at least one picture and I approve your bio. By the way, your bio's brilliant and I guess that that is not much mistakes. )